1) The pitch.
2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch.
I really appreciate all the positive feedback from both of my previous pitches. I try to be intriguing and have a good command of my audience. It helps that I'm so passionate about my cause and business venture. I also appreciate the that a lot of comments say students would be willing to participate and all the pieces of advice they have to make my program even more effective at reaching at larger audience.
3) What did you change, based on the feedback?
I didn't change much. I continued with what was successful such as my positive upbeat attitude and tried to relate to the audience. I did change my location so it wasn't as distracting of a background. I also spoke a little slower and tried to drag less and was more prepared.
This idea is amazing! Textbooks are ridiculous and they are necessary so it really becomes stressful every semester with every class that requires books. I love your idea and the concept. Good job. Here is my post http://cristalsicard.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
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ReplyDeleteThis is probably the best idea I have come across out of all the elevator pitches I've seen! Is this actually being set fourth? Because if I was a real investor I would invest in this in a heartbeat. This is such a good solution to such a big problem-- i'm surprised it doesn't exist already. Keep it up and i'm going to make sure to make use of this if its a real thing! You can check out my pitch here:http://ariannaschmid.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-3.html
This is a great idea! I'd love to see this idea put forth in the future. On your speaking, you did well pitching your idea. I would just work on making sure your speech flows more smoothly without accidental pauses or stutters. http://triedfortime.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-3.html
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